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if you are parched tonight,
the pale of your lips cracked
with thirst for that which
will not claim you;

if you hunger -
the deep and shallow collapsing
into slivered vibrations;

if blindness rejects you, says
no, watch now.
this is the way of it
;

if you are breathing the world
into cinders, inhaling each poison
on purpose, striving
toward an apocalypse
because that is chaos
we can categorize,

then you may understand.
:iconliliwrites:
I found a title that fits it. :)

DD! :la: Thank you ^lightningmonkey and ~jswebb! I simply do not have time to thank everyone for their individual favorites, but I do appreciate them. And I will respond to all comments. :heart:
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Given 2012-01-21
I have received many suggestions for =Kneeling-Glory's work, and while I recommend you give her entire gallery a look, I've chosen to feature Desolate, a small, honest moment of a poem. ( Suggested by ~jswebb and Featured by $wreckling )
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~craazhy Dec 13, 2012  Professional Writer
There is no sound, yet this piece does echo.
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`LiliWrites Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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*b1gfan Nov 12, 2012  Student Writer
inhaling poison on purpose...that's an awe inspiring thought and a wonderful phrase :)
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`LiliWrites Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice to see you around! :heart: Thanks for the comment. How have you been?
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Your wonderful words are featured here: [link]
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Mood: Love =CrematedMan Aug 2, 2012  Student Writer
The first stanza. :-o
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`LiliWrites Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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`HaveTales-WillTell Mar 3, 2012  Professional Writer
I am still stumbling and fumbling my way through my deviation backlog. Congrats on this; it's deserved.
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