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I very much liked 'the graceful composition'. I also really liked 'happy to follow in time'. Although I know it probably just refers to your birthday being after hers (?) it reminded me of someone considered and quietly, calmly, happily watching someone they love enjoying themselves - which reminded me of you so the whole thing just made me smile.
A lovely poem, full of hope and friendship.