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An epistle (a letter poem) for =julietcaesar. This is for `KathrynODriscoll 14th Lit Competition!

Rachel and I had a very good conversation on her New Year's Eve/half-birthday. :) I think we should make it a tradition!
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There's a very deep musicality in these words. I wish there were a better way to describe it. :coffeecup:
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
I love the enjambment mirroring the proposed long period of time. It's an excellent example of the "how" mirroring the "what" you say.

I very much liked 'the graceful composition'. I also really liked 'happy to follow in time'. Although I know it probably just refers to your birthday being after hers (?) it reminded me of someone considered and quietly, calmly, happily watching someone they love enjoying themselves - which reminded me of you so the whole thing just made me smile.

A lovely poem, full of hope and friendship.
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`LiliWrites Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Actually, I was referring to how she's in Australia and I'm in the US, so she technically enters the new year before I do. :giggle: She's younger than me by about 6 years.
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
Ohh, I read too much into the birthday thing then :giggle:
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=DrippingWords Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
This is awesome :D
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`LiliWrites Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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=DrippingWords Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
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`LiliWrites Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao: That is so appropriate for me!
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=julietcaesar Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is actually really appropriate for us...I mean I'm a grasshopper jumping on an insanely tall giraffe/giant. :B
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=DrippingWords Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
:iconrotflplz: I think it's adorable XD
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